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No matter how hard I try to fight,
It keeps increasing in strength and might,
I feel like I am going under,
Feel like I might have to surrender

But yet my heart rages and weeps,
Refusing to give in and go down in to the deep,
Blow by blow they try and take me out,
Push and bite to try and win every bout

I am still standing, though on very weak knees,
Scared that I will fall, but glad for the peace
That is bound to follow the end,
From where there will be no need to mend
:icontrappedtalent:

Author's Comments

Just feeling a little depressed so I thought maybe the effort at trying to write in rhyme might get me out of it..sort of worked too..:)

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:iconkinai-ryuu:
wow this is beautiful!!

very lovely!

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:heart:You gotta live for what you love, and thats the real happiness :heart:

MY DREAM: TO WRITE, TO LIVE, TO LOVE.

And thats just the begining :meow:
:icontrappedtalent:
Thanks..it was just my depression talking really.. so I really appreciate your comment...:)

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Sometimes your worst enemy lives inside you....
:iconkinai-ryuu:
your work reminds me of this literal 8 month struggle of trying to prove to my [ex] boyfriend how much i loved him and needed him. it really is an astounding poem i think. i love it

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:heart:You gotta live for what you love, and thats the real happiness :heart:

MY DREAM: TO WRITE, TO LIVE, TO LOVE.

And thats just the begining :meow:
:icontrappedtalent:
thanks a whole bunch..just what you need when you are feeling low...:)

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Sometimes your worst enemy lives inside you....

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